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Esa versión que descargarte es la versión de android?? @desarollo v4

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Is there a chance to add a gallery feature in the future?

Hey guys, quick question!

I played this games yearsss ago, but I never forgot it(I even remembered the name), I love the plot and the style, but there was little to no content in the game, so I decided to wait for more content, and before I knew it years flew by.

Now that I'm here I'm thrilled that the game is still alive and hat off to the developer for the commitment, I wanted to ask, what update I played? I'm really curious to know how much time is been since then.

I remember that there were basically no sex scene yet( to my despair) there was only a fottjob from the scientist girls and one or two  days in the class, where they just introduced you to the classroom.

Someone may have an idea? How many stuff has been added? Thanks for anyone willing to answer me

Like, you have basically three-four (LONG) days worth of content. Many side quests for sex scenes, alot of fun stuff. The next update is out in a few days for free, actually. No idea on how long though I started three months ago and just finished up until now, but I don't play the game seriously- just when I'm in the mood.

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is there gonna be more to the story? or does it just end when kana slices her tounge and forces us to go with her

I have the same issue after Kana slices her tounge the game ends :/

how do i avoid the bad ending? i cant seem to get past it.

Just do nothing. Let the clock tick out.

is there or will there be some sort of gallery

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Wow this VN's sweet! The characters are great, the premise is a goldmine, and the lore and history behind the premise had more thought put into them than I expected they would. The art was really appealing once I got used to the style. It's easy to get attached to some of the women ;_; 

A lot of the sex scenes are very hot! The depiction of the women's lust is sooo good (love the flickering heart eyes and all the blushing). Also, the game had me cackling during certain parts because the sense of humour can be hysterical. This made it fun to play even when there was nothing naughty going on.

However, the game could really use some serious proofreading. Many parts (especially in the 2nd half of the current game) read as very ESL (English as Second Language). I don't blame you for this but it does often take me out of immersion. In particular, some script mistakes kept appearing very frequently:

  • Incorrect colouring of text as white/grey. That is, the protagonist's thoughts were mistakenly coloured white, or statements from any character were mistakenly coloured grey.
  • Misplaced apostrophes for contractions. e.g. "If'll you excuse me" instead of "If you'll excuse me". 
  • Missing contractions in scenarios where a relaxed character would be speaking informally. Sometimes a playful character in a playful mood will speak in a stiff way because no contractions were used. e.g. something like "I will not let you get away" instead of "I won't let you get away". 
  • Missing words that make the sentence broken. 
  • Using the wrong pronoun like he/her/she/it/they/their when it's obvious to the reader what the right one is. 
  • Sometimes unusual phrases associated with ESL speakers, such as "isn't it?" in an odd place. e.g. "You like how this feels, isn't it?" (this is not a quote from the game, but I can't recall the exact wording of the one that stuck out to me)
  • Incorrect prepositions. e.g. using the wrong one of "on", "in", "under", "above", etc... One example is in the screenshots here on itch.io, where Ruri says, "It's quite an interesting attachment you have on your pants..." when it should probably be, "That's quite an interesting attachment you have in your pants..."
  • The script of some scenes assumes the player made certain choices in the past instead of writing/reading flags. e.g. in a Ruri strip scene I believe she referenced sitting on me in the past when that actually hadn't happened. I think the game said I kissed Mia too but I only remember a hug? There were other occasions where prior scenes were similarly retconned but I don't remember where.
  • Some recurring spelling mistakes. The only ones I can specifically remember are "liking" instead of "licking", and "*glup*" instead of "*gulp*", in several of the one-on-one scenes during the non-linear section. Oh and one pretty early on, "bobby-trapped" instead of "booby-trapped".

Keep up the great work! I'm very excited to see where the story goes next!

Dear matedolce... No... Master!!! Teach us your secret for such a perfect story 🙏🏿

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Ah---ahhh damn. This is so good it messes with the mind. In a sea of mediocre crap this Really stands out. I can't believe how much effort has gone into the art.. they Move, like almost in 3d. The art stye is kind of unique, and immersive. Just.. great. Its not like the bog standard 2d stuff out there. Everyone needs to understand that All of the art, is done by the one creator.

Although the walls of text are sometimes too much, once you get through them... for example.. the Rea scene is just.. I dont know. One of the best buildup and payoffs I can even remember anywhere ever.

Why do this to someones imagination? Damn you Matedoice, a 1 man story making/ artist/ coding machine. You better finish this. :D

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can't wait for the update!😁😁

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The ending scene is horrific, yet I'm kinda into it bro.

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what could the ending POSSIBLY be bro

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The quality of this game blows so many low effort ero visual novels available here out of the water. Your game has a unqiue style and character. I'm very impressed. Great job!

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The story of this game is credible the meme and reference, not to mention art work mmmm Absolute cinema

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游戏很好玩,角色都很漂亮,但是就是没翻译,对于剧情理解不太方便,麻烦请上架其他语言,多谢                                                    The game is very fun and the characters are all very beautiful, but there is no translation. It's not very convenient to understand the plot. Please release it in other languages. Thank you very much

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Goated game jUST found it again I'm glad it's still developing

Found a typo while talking to Laura "I need a way to make Ruri spend her money so she can't but the screwdriver." 

Also seems to be alot of switching between english(En) and English(US)
Mum vs mom

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